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commuting soul

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Sullen faces, a lack of graces,
from a hundred different places.
Few smiles, countless miles, packed aisles.

Did common sense desert this man
to endure such strife,
In the pursuit of quality of life?

The day completes,
five hundred race for three hundred seats,
progress impeded by unhurried feet.

Sorry souls reappraise their goals.
Lives suspended they watch their time
being eaten up by someone else's bottom line.

At home loved ones wait,
no longer notice the 'Sorry I'm late'.
Did common sense desert me
in my hour of need,
or was I deaf to it's cries and blinded by greed?


-David Barral-
Image size
4332x2520px 6.85 MB
Make
PENTAX
Model
PENTAX K20D
Shutter Speed
1/3 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
48 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Mar 9, 2010, 4:41:56 PM
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